--- a/gamelib/scenes/cryo.py	Thu Aug 26 22:10:01 2010 +0200
+++ b/gamelib/scenes/cryo.py	Thu Aug 26 22:25:42 2010 +0200
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
 
         self.add_thing(GenericCryoUnit(8,
             "An empty cryo unit.",
-            "Prisoner A455-9DF9F43C43E5. Medical Malpractice. 10 years.",
+            "Prisoner A455-9DF9F43C43E5. Medical malpractice. 10 years.",
             (
                 (596, 419, 69, 39),
                 (616, 442, 82, 40),
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
         if self.get_data('greet'):
             self.set_data('greet', False)
             return Result(
-                    "You hear a voice: 'Greetings Prisoner %s. "
+                    "You hear a voice: 'Greetings, Prisoner %s. "
                     "This is the Judicial Incarceration Monitor. "
                     "You have been woken early under the terms of the "
                     "emergency conscription act to help with repairs to "

--- a/gamelib/scenes/map.py	Thu Aug 26 22:10:01 2010 +0200
+++ b/gamelib/scenes/map.py	Thu Aug 26 22:25:42 2010 +0200
@@ -35,15 +35,15 @@
         if self.get_data('implant'):
             self.set_data('implant', False)
             return (Result(
-                "JIM say 'Under the terms of the emergency conscription "
-                "act, I have downloaded the ship schematics to your "
+                "JIM says: 'Under the terms of the emergency conscription "
+                "act, I have downloaded the ship's schematics to your "
                 "neural implant to help you navigate around the ship. "
                 "Please report to the bridge.'", style="JIM"),
                 Result(
-                "JIM continues 'Prisoner %s. You are classed "
-                "as a class 1 felon. Obtaining access to the ship shematics "
-                "consitutes a level 2 offence and carries a minimal penalty "
-                "of an additional 3 years on you sentence.'" % PLAYER_ID,
+                "JIM continues: 'Prisoner %s. You are classed "
+                "as a class 1 felon. Obtaining access to the ship's schematics "
+                "constitutes a level 2 offence and carries a minimal penalty "
+                "of an additional 3 years on your sentence.'" % PLAYER_ID,
                 style="JIM"))
 
 

--- a/gamelib/scenes/mess.py	Thu Aug 26 22:10:01 2010 +0200
+++ b/gamelib/scenes/mess.py	Thu Aug 26 22:25:42 2010 +0200
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
     """Base class for the cans"""
 
     def interact_with_full_can(self, item, state):
-        return Result("You bang the cans togther. It sounds like two cans being banged togther.", soundfile="can_hit.ogg")
+        return Result("You bang the cans together. It sounds like two cans being banged together.", soundfile="can_hit.ogg")
 
     def interact_with_dented_can(self, item, state):
         return self.interact_with_full_can(item, state)
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
         return self.interact_with_full_can(item, state)
 
     def interact_with_machete(self, item, state):
-        return Result("You'd managle it beyond usefulness")
+        return Result("You'd mangle it beyond usefulness.")
 
 
 class EmptyCan(BaseCan):
@@ -114,15 +114,15 @@
             self.set_data('cans_available', starting_cans - 1)
             self.set_interact('%icans' % (starting_cans - 1))
             return Result({
-                    3: "Best before along time in the past. Better not eat these.",
-                    2: "Mmmm. Nutritious Bacteria Stew.",
-                    1: "Candied silkworms. Who stocked this place!?",
+                    3: "Best before a long time in the past. Better not eat these.",
+                    2: "Mmmm. Nutritious bacteria stew.",
+                    1: "Candied silkworms. Who stocked this place?!",
                     }[starting_cans])
         else:
             return Result("The rest of the cans are rusted beyond usefulness.")
 
     def get_description(self):
-        return "The contents of these cans looks synthetic."
+        return "The contents of these cans look synthetic."
 
 
 class Tubes(Thing):